Raven Daegmorgan
26 April 2008 @ 02:22 pm
Fictional Heartbreakers  

Friends with eyes on self-publishing fiction, let me explain how NOT to do it.

I know, I'm not a published fiction writer...at least I don't think I am. 'Raven,' you might say, 'how can you not know if you are? Isn't that something someone would remember?' And I might say in response, 'Yes. Very true. But I have four children.' And you would say 'Ah, I see.' So I might have actually published something somewhere when I was younger before my children had destroyed the last of my ability to memorize information, but I don't remember. It's possible, but as far as I know I am not a published fiction writer in any traditional sense.

So why listen to me?

Because I am a published writer in the traditional sense.

This means other people have taken crap I've written and said, "Hey, can I repeat that over here, possibly for money (but mainly for name-credit)?" And I've said "Yes. Sure. Hell yes! Thanks!" And been pleasantly aghast that my verbal meanderings were worth someone else's time and printing costs. Occasionally, I have also been surprised that people have asked "More?" and very occasionally, "More, please?" And sometimes even thrown not entirely insignificant sums of money at me for doing so (though this happens far too rarely).

I've also edited my fair share of things. Usually for people seeking higher grades, a few times for friends seeking publication, and sometimes for things about which large, international companies have said, "This is OK. It must now become Good because many thousands of people will see it. Will you make it Good?" Sometimes followed by "And here is money." To which I reply, "Holy Jesus! Money!"

For nearly a decade, I have also been involved with the highly successful modern independent publishing movement in tabletop gaming, which has taught me more than a few things that are pertinent to self-publishing in fiction.

So I know what I'm talking about when I say: friends with eyes on self-publishing fiction, let me explain how NOT to do it:

Don't do it like The Saga of Sissarak series.[1]



[1] Note that names have been changed to protect the innocent. And me. From lawyers. (But mostly from e-mails sent by angry amateur vanity-press writers who didn't ask for my advice in the first place and are now very embarrassed that I have pointed out their errors in public.)

 
 
Raven Daegmorgan
05 April 2008 @ 05:20 pm
It's Alive!  

The start of a new members-only story up at the Well of Mimir. Yes, it has echoes of DarkSun in its influence, but it goes beyond and outside that. I have what I hope are some interesting surprises in store for readers, and I don't mean just plot-wise, but interpretive and perceptive.

(And I should yell at Jen because she hasn't signed-up for a membership yet... *nudge*cough*poke*)

Also, I've entered into an illustration contract with Neoplastic Press, so I'll be fairly busy this next month or two. The best thing about it is that I'm actually feeling like I can pull it off after having done two good pieces for AF without feeling like a failure and pretender.

Apparently I needed a challenge to kick me in the ass, or a combination of factors, like a challenge and certain realizations regarding what I want my art to be/look like/do consciously and what I subconsciously prefer.

I think there's a marked stylistic difference between my old stuff and my newer stuff, and I've always been happiest with the older work. Therefore, I'm going back to that. No more trying to please the folks who want me to use a different style than I use nor my own trying to be the kind of artist I'm not.

Yes, pushing the boundaries is good. But pushing them should never hold you back.

 
 
Raven Daegmorgan
26 January 2008 @ 06:04 pm
Another New Story  

New fiction up at the Well. Another horror piece. Comments, as usual, very welcome. Here or there. Also, it's really weird what gives you ideas for stories.

 
 
Raven Daegmorgan
30 October 2007 @ 01:22 am
Tales of the Almighty Doppleganger  

"I'm all ears," he said, and slyly changed form into the Kelvarhian Wahls Beast, which did indeed consist entirely of ears.

It was also completely and utterly extinct, for simple reasons of biology far too obvious to repeat here.

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Current Mood: mischievous
 
 
Raven Daegmorgan
20 October 2007 @ 04:29 pm
Thwarted!  

By Bad Reception!

I called Jen, and because I am a clever monkey, my plan was as follows:

"Hello?"
"Go turn on my station."
"Why?"
"Just go."
"Ok."
"What's the song playing?"
"Um, 'I Just Called to Say I Love You'."
"Yep. That's all. Bye!"
But the reception was crap and the station refused to come in at the house, so I told her the plan instead. Which didn't make me seem as much a clever monkey, but it did a little.

Also, I uploaded a new (horror) story at the Well if anyone is interested.

 
 
Raven Daegmorgan
08 September 2007 @ 09:09 pm
New Fiction: Brotherhood  

New short fiction piece up at the Well. A 'one-page' fantasy/horror...wasn't sure what to categorize it as. Are stories involving occultism considered specifically fantasy or horror?

 
 
Raven Daegmorgan
23 July 2007 @ 12:00 am
This. Is. FILM CRITIQUE!!!!  

Damn! I came across this review of 300 tonight and realized I HAD TO post a link, because it says everything I want to say about the whole hullaballo over the film, including to the folks I've attempted to discuss this film with in the past (Vincent, I'm looking at you) and various other similar issues.

I'm going to spoil it for you: ultimately, I see it as a good bash of modern critics (professional and otherwise) and their trends, which are really cultural trends at large in society that I hold no sympathy for snark ).

not so much snark )

Anyways, quotage:

It's somewhat amusing. It makes one feel like saying "not everything is about you, guys. This film is about Spartans, because they were interesting and weird. Get over the 'not about you' part" and you'll begin to get this film.

...

300 is better understood as an expensive art-house project and not your usual genre piece starring Gwyneth or Brad. Critics have tried to twist its story into some kind of contemporary allegory and failed.
Yeah! YEAHYEAHYEAH! *pumpfistair*

(For those missing what I'm getting at here, let me quote a statement attributed to Freud, "Sometimes a cigar is just a cigar.")

in other news )

clever )
 
 
Raven Daegmorgan
31 January 2007 @ 10:45 pm
A Couple Queries and a Story  

I'm looking to read some good science-fantasy these days for color and inspiration, but find myself at a loss of what to read: I just don't know about many books that fall into this category or about the authors who write in the genre. Any suggestions?

Also, I'm looking to get my hands on a copy of Phoenae: The Fierce Joy of Being Alive, an out-of-print RPG from Ian Press that came out some years back (and which I have never seen since). If anyone has a copy they would be willing to sell, or knows where I can score a copy, please let me know!

...Related Anecdote... )

 
 
Raven Daegmorgan
22 June 2006 @ 10:43 pm
He-Who-Shall-Not-Be-Forgotten!  
I was about to start this post with a "Damn, I should have written down my dream this morning..." because I'd forgotten it and was thinking it would have made a great one-page for my fiction site. Then I promptly realized I hadn't forgotten it after all!

You have to respect any dream where the main protagonist is a do-gooding wizard named Halaster who goes by the unfortunate nickname "Hastur", and the antagonist is a crazed, murderous gnome dressed up like a ghoul.

Of course, that later discovery came only after my hectic scramble to avoid being touched and paralyzed by the "ghoul", and the failure of a number of Halaster's holy spells to do anything to the (seemingly) terrifyingly impervious thing as it chased me around.

Once I realized it was a gnome in gruesome dress-up, I grabbed him and neatly solved the whole chasing-and-terrifying-me problem by bashing his head into the wall, knocking him out.

The weirdest and most amusing part, for a Lovecraft geek and long-time D&D gamer like myself, is still recalling my cries for help as I ran around yelling "Hastur!"

Man, I think I can make some good fic out of the character bits there. Heck, I could make a really cool character from that. Wizards in the Vineyard, Trait: Calling my name brings trouble.
 
 
Raven Daegmorgan
19 February 2006 @ 06:36 pm
Character and Plot in Fiction and RPGs  
I have been steadily reworking my NaNoWriMo submission over the past few weeks, whenever I have some free time at work or a quiet night at home (quit laughing, it DOES happen occasionally). I have been cleaning it up, rewriting the parts I wrote but did not like for various reasons, and adding to it because it still needs another 20K words or so before I reach the conclusion.

While I was doing that, I was reading through some old columns about writing to try and tackle a particular hitch I've come to at a very important crux in the story's progress, and while skimming the basics to find what I was looking for, some advice about writing popped out (that I paraphrase here): "Make sure it's your characters that define the story and not the other way round."

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